On the way to Harbin,I felt so sick in the train.When I woke up at midnight,I found my Dad sitting by me with tired eyes.At this very moment,I felt deeply that my Dad was becoming older.Looking at his eyes,I burst into tears. I really wondered how he felt when he returned home,just in the same train,taking 36hours for the long journey.Later on,I called him and asked this question.He just said："It doesn't matter.All of you have done a good job.As your father,I am so proud."
The love between family members is precious only when we are parted,maybe.The love between my father and me is clearer,only
when it is conducted by a three-thousand-kilometre-long phone line,and only then the bad time when we had some argument between us. These past few years,I felt regret for not understanding my Dad for so long.If only I were a good boy!M y Dad didn't demand that I should be very good at studying,never.He just hoped that I could live creatively.In my life,he sets a good example for me and teaches me how to study,how to be a good man and how to live in the world!
This is a very well-structured and reflective account of the relationship between a young man and his father.It has few mistakes in word order. But the simple style suits the subject.There is good use of detail in small incidents such as the father carrying the boy on his shoulders and the train journey.
当我年轻的时候，我总是坐在我的父亲的肩膀，与他进行强有力的hands.I我的手感到这是一个美好的时光。当我把收音机打开这个下午，我听到其中一首歌曲我想起我的父亲。
作为一个男孩，我一直以为我的爸爸是不如别人的好。他没来学校挑选后，下雨或下雪的天气我，甚至没有给我机会，在他面前失去自己的脾气。他总是像一个非常严格的man.He看起来是如此节俭，他并不想改变14英寸电视一至去年year.Accordingly新的一盘，我相信这是真的，我不能很好相处我父亲在我的生命。
不过，我的父亲没有考虑它seriously.He爱自己的方式在他自己的孩子。当他年轻时，他被迫住在小乡镇在那里我是born.After几年，他又来到city.When我是一个男孩，他作为一名车手，然后前往附近的区，与他一起到我，说我应该知道一些有关的world.He喜欢拍照，并由于这个原因，我渐渐喜欢上了它，too.Music是他的一个爱好，尤其是打piano.I还记得的日子我选择了大学，入学，examination.It是时间为我父亲的特殊时期以及me.When我选择了在哈尔滨大学，我的父亲同意我的计划，并表示对我的母亲，谁不认为这对我来说是一件好事要在中国东北的大学，这是没有在一个地方住得离家alone.I遇到一个孩子是件好事感谢他的智慧我的爸爸。
在去哈尔滨途中，我感到在我生病的train.When半夜醒来，我发现我的爸爸坐在我累eyes.At这一刻，我深深感到，我的爸爸是在他成为older.Looking眼神里，我放声哭了。我真的不知道他感觉如何时，他刚刚在同一返回火车回家，到了长journey.Later上36小时，我打电话给他，问这question.He只是说：“这不是你matter.All有你父亲做了很好的job.As，我感到很自豪。“
家庭成员之间的爱情是可贵的是，在我们分手前，maybe.The爱我的父亲和我更清楚，只
当它是由一个3千公里长的电话线，然后才坏的时候，我们有一些我们之间的争论。这几年，我感到不理解我的爸爸这么long.If遗憾只有我是个好孩子！男Ÿ爸爸没有要求我应该是非常善于学习，never.He只希望我能活creatively.In我的生命，他为我树立了好榜样，教我如何学习，如何做一个好人，如何在生活中的世界！
