勇敢的尝试 Brave Try

Last week, my father took me to the swimming pool, he told me that I should learn to swimming, so that I could protect myself when I meet the emergent situation. I was so afraid of the water at the beginning, my father asked to be brave, I tried to go into the water many times, finally I made it. It is a good try for me, I believe I can swim soon. 
上周，我的爸爸带我到游泳池，他告诉我应该要学会游泳，这样我在遇到紧急情况时能够保护自己。刚开始，我很害怕水，爸爸叫我要勇敢，我尝试着多次下水，最后我终于成功了。这对于我来说是很好的尝试，我相信我很快就会游泳了。